Writing U12

WRITING
A.  Read the information in the table below
Essay Contest!
Winners of this year’s essay contest will receive an e-reader. Make sure to turn in your essay by the deadline in order to be eligible for this fantastic prize!

This year’s theme is “My Personal Achievement Goal”
Requirements:

· Write a four-paragraph essay about a goal you would like to achieve.
· Choose something that is realistic.
· Include the reasons why you want to achieve your goal.
· Include skills and training your already have that will help you achieve your goal.
· Include skills and training you will need in the future to achieve your goal.
B.  Write an essay for the contest in part A

Organize you essay as follows:

·  Paragraph 1: State your goal and why you want to achieve it.
·  Paragraph 2: Describe skills and / or training you already have that will help you achieve you goal.
·  Paragraph 3: Describe skills and / or training you want to receive in order to achieve your goal.
·  Paragraph 4: Conclude by restating your goal and why you want to achieve it.

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Sample Answer

I am passionate about photography and want to pursue it as my future career. My goal is to open my own photography studio.

My preferred subjects are people. I already have experience in taking family portraits as I have done an internship in a photography studio that specializes in photographing children. I develop my skills photographing small children. On the one hand, they are very natural, but on the other hand, they have a short attention span, so you have to be quick!

I plan to further improve my skills by taking courses in how to edit digital photos. Many professional photographers use programs to improve their pictures in this way. I would also like to learn more about artificial lighting, which is especially important in studio photography.


In conclusion, it has always been a dream of mine to own a photography studio. With the sills I already have as well as courses I plan to take in the future, I now that I will achieve this goal.



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